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:iconadyalexander:
This would be my first critique and I will try to cover most of the aspects I find right or wrong about this picture first of all mentioning that I am not a professional just a guy that has quite a refined aesthetics sense.

I really liked this guy from the very first pics I saw him in, unfortunately his body has some flaws that prevent pics like this from being perfect. No it's not his body hair or his body shape I actually like all those and especially his long hair. It's actually the penis and the slight tan line. Somehow a penis cut like that is anything but aesthetic looking you might wanna try some compositions that hide it.

The bigger impact of this photo is actually his long hair and a slight smile that make his face look sweet. The stand pose is not doing anything much really, actually this particular model is not a very natural poser, he should learn more try being more relaxed and he should be doing more than listening to how he's being told to sit in front of the camera.
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knowingme Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014
A fine model.  I love the body hair Jay.
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thedreamismine Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014
Thanks for commenting Anthony
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:icondynakor:
dynakor Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Professional General Artist
I like this a lot! The model is beautiful! I like the simplicity of the pose and composition. This works as both art and erotica. Excellent work!
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thedreamismine Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014
Thanks much Korey
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MichaelJ83 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Gogeous View
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thedreamismine Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014
Thanks Mike.
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MichaelJ83 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Welcome J
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NIKON CORPORATION
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NIKON D70
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